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Re: [RP] Vacation Destination.
September 26, 2013 08:16AM
Louisa opened the door, looking disheveled and sleepy and Carmen felt guilty for waking her.

“Are you okay? I thought you had that date.” she asked.

“It…didn’t work out. I couldn’t sleep so I went for a walk. I thought you might have been up so I wanted to see if you wanted to talk. I’m sorry if I woke you.” Carmen apologized.

Every one of her senses were warning her that something was off with Louisa, but Carmen couldn’t exactly come right out and ask.

“I’ll let you get back to sleep.” Carmen told her, turning to go to her room. She paused, looking back. “I was going to do some shopping tomorrow, maybe see the sights. Did you want to come with me?” she asked, a hopeful note in her voice.

Was it her imagination or did a shadow move behind Louisa? Chalking it up to tiredness, she shook her head. As far as she knew, Louisa was here alone. But now more than ever, Carmen was feeling a sense of wrongness.

Re: [RP] Vacation Destination.
September 26, 2013 08:28AM
Room 546

Louisa made an ‘o’ shape with her mouth, that the date didn’t work out. The thing was, she already knew. The fact the date failed saved her life. Something that Louisa was actually thankful for. Louisa really liked Carmen, a lot. It pained her to know that Shane was using her to get to Carmen, and the last thing she wanted was to have her suffer the same fate as she had for all these years.

“I’ll let you get back to sleep.” It was an endearing thought, but Louisa knew there would be no sleep for her. Louisa knew he was in her apartment, waiting for a moment to strike, and Louisa stood in the way. Wordlessly, she mouthed “He’s here.” swallowing hard, as she tried to appear normal, when Carmen spoke about shopping and a tour.

“I was going to do some shopping tomorrow, maybe see the sights. Did you want to come with me?”

Louisa’s left eye held a tear, that ran down her cheek as she said loud enough for him to hear. “I’d like that…a lot.”, before nervously wiping away the tear, and her face crumpling. She started to close the door, trying to protect Carmen, and saying“Good night.”



Re: [RP] Vacation Destination.
September 26, 2013 08:34AM
“Whoa” Carmen thought, witnessing Louisa’s face crumble. She had seen her mouth whisper something but couldn’t make out what it was.

“Louisa, what’s wrong? What’s got you so upset?” Carmen moved back toward Louisa’s room. “Do you want to talk about it? I’m a good listener.” she offered. She couldn’t explain why this young woman seemed like she needed a friend, she just wanted to try and be that person. Maybe there was an awful boyfriend or husband somewhere like she originally thought. “Man problems?” she hazard a guess. Her gut instincts were usually correct. And right now, hers were screaming at her to get away from Louisa’s room as quickly as possible, but she wasn’t going to leave this woman alone.

“Can I come in?” she asked in a soft and kind voice. She was wide awake now and felt the need to help Louisa in any way she could.

Re: [RP] Vacation Destination.
September 26, 2013 08:47AM
Room 546

“Louisa, what’s wrong? What’s got you so upset?” 

Oh no…this was bad. Louisa was trying to save her by shutting the door, but Carmen mustn’t have understood her. Her eyes implored her, almost begging, as she was shaking like a leaf.


Louisa stuttered as the sound of footsteps were coming behind her. SHANE was now onto this situation, and about to make it all the worse.

“Do you want to talk about it? I’m a good listener.”

Louisa was sure she was a good listener, but Carmen wouldn’t want to hear from the one behind the door.

“Carmen…..I..” Lousa uttered, frightened now out of her mind.

“Can I come in?” At these words, Louisa’s eyes shot open, cause she felt something on her back. The room behind her was dark, and it would be hard to see. She fought so hard to protect her, but she knew to say no now, would be the finish of her.


Louisa stepped back, allowing Carmen entry. If she did, Louisa would close the door, and that is when the real games began.


Re: [RP] Vacation Destination.
September 26, 2013 09:01AM

Carmen’s senses were on high alert, practically screeching at her to run before it was too late. But Louisa seemed very upset and Carmen just couldn’t leave her like that.

Louisa’s eyes were wide with fright as Carmen asked to come in. For a moment, Carmen thought she was going to say no, but Louisa seemed to jerk in place before wilting like a flower. She stepped aside and opened the door wider.


Carmen gave her a smile, hoping to comfort her with her presence as she stepped inside. It was then the smell hit her. It was dark, musky and all too familiar. Carmen’s eyes widened and she whirled around, having every intention of leaving as quickly as she had come in but it was far too late.

Louisa, misery etched in every line of her body had already closed and locked the door, standing in front of it like a saddened sentry. Tears were flowing down her cheeks as she stared at Carmen. “I’m so sorry.” her eyes were practically begging.

Re: [RP] Vacation Destination.
September 26, 2013 09:14AM
Room 546

It was as the door was locked, that a dark and menacing laugh was heard.

“Good girl, Louisa.. See? That wasn’t so hard, now was it?”

It was Shane, who turned on the light, and grinned at Carmen mercilessly. Louisa bowed her head, knowing she had just betrayed Carmen, as Shane rounded on the feisty IA officer. Oh how he had waited for this moment. He could smell the fear, and it was delicious.


“You know, Lou…you saved her life earlier, by tossing out that man. She was thisssss close to having her brains blown out….and you had to scream like a banshee. Personally, I loved it.”

Shane walked right up to Carmen, and then without warning, he took her into his arms, like a long lost lover. Eyes of dread staring into hers.

“I have wanted you for so so long. Dreamt of your taste Lou. And now…YOU..ARE…MINE!” With fangs exposed, he launched his head to her neck, to start to feed upon her.


Re: [RP] Vacation Destination.
September 26, 2013 09:24AM
There was a dark laugh from somewhere in the room and the lights flickered on.

And there he was. Shane.

“Oh fuck!” Carmen exclaimed. Now she knew the reason for Louisa’s fear. But she couldn’t blame her, not completely. She should have walked away when she had the chance and now that moment was gone.

“You know, Lou…you saved her life earlier, by tossing out that man. She was thisssss close to having her brains blown out….and you had to scream like a banshee. Personally, I loved it.”

Carmen looked at Louisa, who was looking at the floor. He would dare hurt such a sweet woman? All for a chance at herself?

Before she could reply, Shane walked right up to her and took her in his arms. His eyes were dark and menacing as he stared into her own. She gulped hard and tried to damp down her fear.

“Let go of me!” she hissed, struggling in his embrace.

“I have wanted you for so so long. Dreamt of your taste Lou. And now…YOU..ARE…MINE!” he growled, exposing his fangs and moving toward her neck.

While this was going on, she had not been idle. She had a hand clenched behind her back, slowly drawing upon her powers. There was the slight hint of ozone in the air as she continued to struggle. She felt the tips of his fangs against her neck and knew it was now or never. With a cry of rage, her fist came around, electricity sparking between her fingers, slamming into his gut. If it was effective, it would push him away from her into the wall behind him.

Re: [RP] Vacation Destination.
September 26, 2013 09:32AM
Room 546

“Let go of me!” Carmen hissed, struggling, while in behind her, Louisa had her hands behind her back, fiddling with the lock on the door. The green light came on, and Louisa started to raise her head slowly, just as Shane made his declaration, and proceeded to attack her with his elongated fangs.

But Carmen was not exactly powerless, in fact she had a special talent, that meant she could use the ozone, to charge up a ball of electricity with her fingers, and used this, to punch Shane in the gut. This knocked him back and he doubled over hitting the wall. With this moment of madness, Louisa hurled open the door and screamed at Carmen


The door opened, it was Carmen’s chance at freedom, and Louisa ran at Shane, as he got back up. “Leave her alone!” She cried, as Shane grabbed her head, and then in one foul movement, he snapped her neck and she dropped to the floor….dead.


Re: [RP] Vacation Destination.
September 26, 2013 09:39AM
“RUN!” Louisa screamed, throwing open the door as Shane went flying into the wall. He was only down for a moment, and was soon back on his feet. “Leave her alone!” Louisa screamed, charging at Shane.

Carmen watched on in horror as Shane grabbed Louisa by her head and snapped her neck like a twig. Louisa fell to the floor with a soft whispering thud, eyes glazed over in death.

“Sweet Jesus!” Carmen whispered, eyes fixed on Louisa’s still form. That seemed to break her paralysis and she started to run for the open door. She had to get out of here and as far away from this man as possible. He was more dangerous then she’d ever realized, and now her own life was in some very serious danger.

Re: [RP] Vacation Destination.
September 26, 2013 09:49AM
Room 546

Shane had reacted almost by a gut instinct, when he took Louisa’s head in his hands and then twisted it so sharply, that her neck simply broke. The door open, and the horrified look upon Carmen’s face, Shane suddenly found himself caught by his own demons.

Carmen ran out the door, and Shane was about to follow her, when he took a double take at Louisa.

Her face, the expression was one of peace. As radiant and beautiful as the first time he used her as his blood doll. Carmen was getting away, but he knew there would be more chances. Shane simply walked to the door and closed it, before going back over to where Louisa’s body lay. Staring at him, with those big eyes of hers. Shane crouched down and gently scooped her up, and then held her to him, starting to rock back and forth…whispering…“Good girl…such a good girl.”


(Fade to black)


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